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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

The plot thickens! And a new friend! That was another fun installment. I love how they keep saying the full name of the Agency, too. Haha. The End... 😎

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Chris! Your support and comments really help drive the story! With all due respect and appreciation from the J Kitten, Sleuth & Purveyor of Bright Shiny Objects Detective Agency! Please stay tuned. The end.

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April Whalley's avatar

Another excellent chapter from our clever critter detectives, well done Heidi, such fun writing.

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What big cat forgets

might reveal important clues.

Our sleuths continue

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, April! Your feedback is so encouraging! And we now have a special Haiku compilation that continues to grow. Yes, my friend! We are taking notes on all of these amazing poems you are sharing with us. So fun!

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April Whalley's avatar

Yay! Excellent

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Detectives haiku.

Follow mystery story

in small critter verse

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Love it! Thank you, April!

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Pamela Leavey's avatar

The Critters are hitting the road! Looking forward to the next chapter, Heidi!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Pamela! I hope you enjoyed the opening video from the Oregon Coast. You inspired me to go on a beach walk!

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Jules Powellhi's avatar

Another great chapter! You and your Critters and a great crew! Keep writing… luvluvluv it!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Jules! We so appreciate having you along for the ride with us! Stay tuned, it’s about to get wild!

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Sheryl O'Connell's avatar

Just delightful reading. I look forward to each post/chapter.

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Sheryl! The Critters are on the verge of cooking up something wild! Thank you very much for reading and being here with us.:)

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Diana van Eyk's avatar

A trip to San Francisco! I can hardly wait for the next chapter, Heidi and critters.

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Diana! We are very excited that you are staying tuned!

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Paul Leone's avatar

The plot thickens delightfully!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Paul! The Critters have fastened their seatbelts! Thank you so much for reading!

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Neil Barker's avatar

I liked this chapter, Heidi and a great idea to continue to include Star in the story. I am interested in seeing what happens next chapter with a road trip to San Francisco. :)

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Neil! Things are about to get wild! Thank you very much for staying tuned! And thank you for being so appreciative of Star continuing to shine.:)

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Kristin! What could drive the plot more than a Serval with amnesia! Thank you very much, my friend.:)

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

That’s so fun! A secret evil twin! Perhaps the Critters need to plan on that storyline for the future with a New Jersey setting. I kinda like that idea.:)

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