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Trudi Nicola's avatar

All action and more surprises! These Critters know how to captivate their readers.

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Trudi! Please stay tuned for a deep deep psychological exploration in Chapter 10!

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Mary B's avatar

Hypnosis triggered by the hypnotic mechanism in one's possession? Brilliant, Heidi! 😃 Those critters are so well rounded in world things' knowledge and procedures! Can't wait to read more. ⌚︎

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Mary! Yes, hypnosis and behavioral modification make for a very very powerful plot twist. Thank you so much for staying tuned as Jasper Kitten works this out.:)

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Diana van Eyk's avatar

Aw, yes, driving the plot forward...with Rufus Sub One Hundred. I look forward to the rest of the swerves and curves of this tale. Thanks, Heidi and critters, for this plot twist.

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Diana! Jasper Kitten has his work cut out for him in the next chapter. Will he be able to deprogram Rufus Sub One Hundred? Thank you for reading and staying tuned!

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Neil Barker's avatar

Interesting twist in this chapter, Heidi! I thought I'd try my hand at an impromptu haiku for this chapter:

New orange feline,

And then there were one hundred,

Helping their new friend.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Neil! This Haiku is so wonderful! I luvluvluv it! So fun and a great contribution to the story.:)

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