Thank you, Perry! Has Arya returned? I sure hope so. And he is correct in his understand of Mr. Serval. The plot thickens in Ch. 6, so please stay tuned!
I enjoyed their journey passing the Golden Gate Bridge. The first time I walked across the Golden Gate Bridge was when I was four years old in somewhat overwhelmed and terrified a bit and grabbing my Dad’s hand. 🌁🌉
Thank you, Charlotte! We are so happy to have you here with us at Critters. Your own travelogues are incredible and your comments and support here mean so much to us.:) I can relate to your childhood experience of crossing a suspension bridge. When I was 6, my dad took me on the pedestrian suspension bridge in Vancouver BC and I froze mid-span. He had to carry me back.
Great story and descriptions of all they would see and smell .Love that you kept Star in Heidi . Makes it all keep moving along . I understand no memory very well like Mr. Serval . Yet something might be a miss there . Love the story Heidi . hugs and pets to all and a kiss towards the sky for the shining Star
Thank you, Mitch! We feel really encouraged by the positive feedback on the descriptive writing. Thank you very much. We’re so pleased that you are enjoying the detective story and thank you for your luvluvluv for Star as this good energy goes out to her. Take good care.:)
Really really REALLY enjoyed this story. I remember San Fran bridge very well and contributed much $ to its existence . Haha. My kitty kat is a genuine fraidy cat. If he hears me murmur the word “shit” he gies scurrying under the bed, his safe place. Haha. Bc following that word sometimes means “commotion” my son calls it. And kitty kat no like commotion. Like cleaning up a mess or something like that. And one look at the vacume cleaner even if not running yet send him under the bed, too.
Thank you, Joanne! Those vacuum cleaners certainly can have that effect on cats! Love this comment so much. Thank you very much for being here with us at Critters and please stay tuned for Ch. 6!
Thank you, Noelle & Dolly! Please, thank your Hooman, too! We are so pleased that you luvluvluv the mystery series! Perhaps in the future, we can all get into an adventure, a critter mystery together in New Jersey! We could include a plot point about pumping gas which would generate a lot of conflict! Super fun! And then get lost in the PIne Barrens! Toe bean to toe bean!
I love the twist the story has taken, Heidi. Great to see the CwC crew on a road trip investigation. Looking forward to Chapter 6!
Thank you, Neil! It’s so encouraging to hear your support! Stay tuned for the next step of this work in progress!
Arya points out that Mr. Serval is one suspicious cat. Notwithstanding his understandable fear of cats, Arya might have a point.
Thank you, Perry! Has Arya returned? I sure hope so. And he is correct in his understand of Mr. Serval. The plot thickens in Ch. 6, so please stay tuned!
Yes, Arya and our family were reunited Sunday afternoon. It was a happy homecoming.
Arya and I remain faithful readers.🐦🦜🕊
Wonderful news! That makes my day! I had a good feeling about his homing instinct. Thank goodness.:) And, of course, thank you for reading Critters.:)
Great episode Heidi!
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Have our sleuths been lured
to dock of the bay rental?
Suspicious Serval!
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Thank you, April! We are going to feature your Haiku comments in our Friday conversation! So fun!
Gasp! Where did Mr. Serval go?!
Sounds like a great spot in San Francisco. I can see the bridge and hear the waves...
I can hardly wait to read the next chapter, Heidi and critters.
Thank you, Diana! What great feedback! The atmospheric vibes will continue in Ch 6, so please stay tuned! So fun.:)
It's full of surprises! I look forward to chapter 6, Heidi.
Another fun installment! Thanks for sharing it with us. Thank you very much. The end... 😎
Thank you, Chris! We really appreciate your readership and look forward to your comments.:) The end.
I enjoyed this story so much Heidi! Charming!
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I enjoyed their journey passing the Golden Gate Bridge. The first time I walked across the Golden Gate Bridge was when I was four years old in somewhat overwhelmed and terrified a bit and grabbing my Dad’s hand. 🌁🌉
Thank you, Charlotte! We are so happy to have you here with us at Critters. Your own travelogues are incredible and your comments and support here mean so much to us.:) I can relate to your childhood experience of crossing a suspension bridge. When I was 6, my dad took me on the pedestrian suspension bridge in Vancouver BC and I froze mid-span. He had to carry me back.
Great story and descriptions of all they would see and smell .Love that you kept Star in Heidi . Makes it all keep moving along . I understand no memory very well like Mr. Serval . Yet something might be a miss there . Love the story Heidi . hugs and pets to all and a kiss towards the sky for the shining Star
Thank you, Mitch! We feel really encouraged by the positive feedback on the descriptive writing. Thank you very much. We’re so pleased that you are enjoying the detective story and thank you for your luvluvluv for Star as this good energy goes out to her. Take good care.:)
Is there smaller houseguests in the Earthquake Shack?
Thank you, Squizz! What an excellent question! Stay tuned, my friend!
Excellent. Your posts are always so much fun to read, Heidi.
Thank you, C.J.! Thank you for such a huge compliment and please stay tuned for Ch. 6!
Will do! Thank you!
Really really REALLY enjoyed this story. I remember San Fran bridge very well and contributed much $ to its existence . Haha. My kitty kat is a genuine fraidy cat. If he hears me murmur the word “shit” he gies scurrying under the bed, his safe place. Haha. Bc following that word sometimes means “commotion” my son calls it. And kitty kat no like commotion. Like cleaning up a mess or something like that. And one look at the vacume cleaner even if not running yet send him under the bed, too.
Thank you, Joanne! Those vacuum cleaners certainly can have that effect on cats! Love this comment so much. Thank you very much for being here with us at Critters and please stay tuned for Ch. 6!
Thank you, Noelle & Dolly! Please, thank your Hooman, too! We are so pleased that you luvluvluv the mystery series! Perhaps in the future, we can all get into an adventure, a critter mystery together in New Jersey! We could include a plot point about pumping gas which would generate a lot of conflict! Super fun! And then get lost in the PIne Barrens! Toe bean to toe bean!
The wheels are in motion!
Eggselent! Luvluvluv this! Please tell us more about the Jersey devil!