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Diana van Eyk's avatar

This chapter is a real cliff hanger, Heidi and critters. Gosh! I hope everyone's alright...

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Diana! The Critters have really done it this time, haven't they! Thank you so much for being here with us!

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Diana van Eyk's avatar

My pleasure!

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Neil Barker's avatar

An excellent chapter, Heidi. Really like the descriptions and imagery in this part! Looking forward to Chapter 7 and what has happened to the critter crew!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Neil! The Critters are hard at work at their Detective Agency as we speak! Thank you very much for staying tuned for Ch 7!

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Perry J. Greenbaum 🇨🇦 🦜's avatar

Could it have been a trap the furry detectives fell into? How much should they trust Mr. Serval? What secrets will be unlocked? These are questions that need be asked. These are questions that Arya the Cockatiel has raised.

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Perry & Arya! These are excellent existential questions for our sleuths! Thank you very much for helping to drive the plot as it continues to thicken! Please stay tuned for Ch 7 next Tue.:)

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Heidi, you're so clever! How you come up with these fascinates me.

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, C.J. We are truly humbled by your support and readership! You inspire us!

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C.J. Heck's avatar

❤️💕

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Very exciting! That's a great cliffhanger. Luvluvluv it. The end... 😎

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Chris! You never know what these Critters are going to come up with next! Thank you so much for reading!

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April Whalley's avatar

Oooo, what an exciting episode Heidi.... well done ❤

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Mr Serval takes off

Our sleuth friends are in pursuit

Hither and thither

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Deep in the warehouse

keep close for comfort, until......

Unfathomable

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, April! I’m keeping these furever! Luvlulvuv it!

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David M. Poff's avatar

Great stuff Heidi!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, David! We’re always so happy to have you here with us at Critters!

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Catherine Wilde - SoulCareMom's avatar

Love your fun and engaging writing style, Heidi 💖

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Catherine! We luvluvluv having you here with us at Critters!

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SquizzRadical's avatar

I love the imagery the best :) I hope it's a slide, they're always fun.

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Squizz! That’s a great idea about the slide, so clever! In the next little while, we’ll be working the incredible Degus into the story! So fun.:)

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SquizzRadical's avatar

*does excited degu warbles and beats tail*

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

We luvluvluv it! Will also work in a Kangaroo Rat, so thank you for that incredible information!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Kristin! We luvluvluv these emojis! Please, stay tuned for Ch 7 next week! Thank you very much, my friend.:)🌟

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, my friend. So fun!

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