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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Exciting! What an amazing escape! He really is like Jasper Bond! Haha. So. Much. Fun. The end... 😎

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you so much, Chris! We luvluvluv the Bond reference! Double oh seven. The End.

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April Whalley's avatar

Excellent episode Heidi. The nefarious perp had me genuinely angry on behalf of our heroes. That's very good writing right there!!

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Nefarious laugh

Send such shivers down our spines

But too late! They're trapped.

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Domesticated!

Mongrels! How dare he insult

Our brave kind heroes

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, April! We so appreciate your feedback and incredible Haiku responses! Domesticated! Luvluvluv it!

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mitch's avatar

Great story and ending ? how do they get them all out ? Waiting to find out . Great writing Heidi . Hugs and pets to you and the furry detectives .

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Mitch! The Critter Detectives are hard at work, coming to the rescue! Sending healing vibes and gratitude to you.:)

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mitch's avatar

Sorry i was late to you and the great detectives . Hugs to all big one to Star My soon to be heavenly friend .Just hope not to soon

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

You always have a place here with us, Mitch. We look forward to your readership. The Critters already have their next detective story in the works for the New Year and we hope that is something for you to look forward to. Take good care.

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Kiwiwriter47's avatar

This is such a fun story....I hope for a positive outcome, too.

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Kiwi! We’re so happy to know you’re enjoying the story! Thank you as ever for being here with us and please stay tuned!

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Cindy Ojczyk's avatar

I'm in love with the final photo of the pets through the magnifying glass. So creative and perfect for the inventive adventures of the critters!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Cindy! The photo series was a lot of fun to put together. Please, stay tuned for one more addition when Jojo makes his big detective debut soon.:)

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Perry J. Greenbaum 🇨🇦 🦜's avatar

Captive critters working for nefarious purposes. Such rich symbolism in this story. Clipped wings and lack of freedom. Arya and I hope for a positive outcome.🦜🐦🕊

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you Perry & Arya! At heart, we are optimists at Critters, so please stay tuned for our concluding chapters. We are grateful for Arya’s incredible insights so far along the way.:)

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Michael's avatar

Pangolin Liberation Now! To what tune is that Shanty sung?

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Michael! That’s a very good question! Do you have a favorite sea shanty tune?

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Michael's avatar

I'll work on it!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

I had Wellerman in mind. Keep me posted.:)

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Michael's avatar

Well that was my first choice too but it requires expanding the lyrics somewhat!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Well, consider the Critter version a synopsis.:)

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Lois Thomson Bowersock's avatar

Jasper Kitten, this is Emily Bowersock,

Please be very careful with the Critters. This is dangerous and the Hounds, Julie Rae and I are scared for you. Let us know if you need William and Travis the Pup to help you. Be brave!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you for your concern and offer of support, Emily and all of the Bowersock Hounds. My detectives and I will continue to be vigilant and exercise extreme care as we continue to crack this case wide open. I remain yours truly, J Kitten. Thank you very much.

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Diana van Eyk's avatar

This tale becomes more exciting all the time. Who would have guessed there was a smuggling ring? I look forward to the next instalment, Heidi and critters.

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Diana! The Critters are hard at work to crack the case wide open! Please, stay tuned for Ch 16!

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Neil Barker's avatar

Another excellent chapter, Heidi! I'm looking forward to learning more about the Pangolins and their sea shanty!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Neil! Pangolins are one of the most trafficked species in wildlife crimes. The Critters are coming to the rescue. Thank you very much for staying tuned.:)

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