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Diana van Eyk's avatar

Ooh, the plot thickens! We meet the nefarious perp and find out about a doppelgänger...what will happen next? Thanks for this mysterious mystery, Heidi and critters.

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you Diana! We are so happy that you are staying the course with the Critters and their mysterious mystery indeed.:) The plot thickens with the upcoming Ch. 15, so please stay tuned because something is bound to happen next!

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Michael's avatar

Two Rhino Auklets!

Turnabout will be fair play

Critters triumphant?

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Critter conundrum

An Auklet prefers not to

Liberation now

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Neil Barker's avatar

A most interesting twist with the Rhino Auklets, Heidi! I liked this chapter and especially enjoyed the dialogue between Rodney and the Nefarious Perp/Hooman. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Neil! Glad you found the doppleganger/double identity twist with the Rhino Auklets interesting. The dialogue was a lot of fun to write and it’s great to know that you enjoyed reading it. Please, stay tuned for Ch 15!

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April Whalley's avatar

Such a gripping episode Heidi! Loved it.

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Finally we meet

nemesis of our heroes.

Can they outsmart him?

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An imprinted hatchling?

Nefarious perp's hubris

Might be his downfall

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, April! So wonderful to know you enjoyed this chapter. We luvluvluv these haikus! The commentary collection grows!

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James Freitas's avatar

You have me on the edge of my seat! Great chapter Heidi

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, James! Is that seat a bureaucratic business chair, by any chance? Thank you so much for reading!

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Bree's avatar

Really engaging episode, lovely illustrations

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Bree! We are so happy to have you here with us and our Critter Detectives.:)

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Perry J. Greenbaum 🇨🇦 🦜's avatar

“But Finnegan stands for freedom,” stated Star.

Exactly right, Arya the Cockatiel points out. No avian worth his wings wants to be held captive. Finnegan is just biding his time, Arya and I suspect, till he makes his granf escape.

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Perry & Arya! We have great confidence in Arya's insights as the plot thickens and the mystery unfolds.

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SquizzRadical's avatar

This mystery is so mysterious, I think Sherlock Holmes would find it exciting!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Squizz! This is the highest of compliments and very elementary for this mysterious mystery! Do you think the Degus will come back?

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Lovely! What a great villain! It's like a Bond movie, with animals. The end. Haha... 😎

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Chris! The comparison to a Bond movie is a big compliment.:) Will catch up with your Haiku prompts soon. Thank you so much for reading.

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Michael's avatar

Life itself is a mystery!

The story needs never end...

The agency gets new cases?

Chapter 199 to come?

I hope so!

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Michael and so encouraging! We are planning on a detective series. The Case of The Misplaced Priority Envelope is scheduled to wrap itself up with a big bow for the holidays in about a month or so.:)

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mitch's avatar

Great chapter Heidi . Really loved it . So they now know who the perp is yet how many more are involved ? Only Finnegan , might know . good work to all you critters . I hope you can escape . hugs and pets

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Mitch! You are asking excellent questions of the Critters and they will get back to you soon. Please, stay tuned! Sending healing vibes.

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Dee Rambeau's avatar

☺️❤️

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Dee! 😺🐾🐾

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Thank you, Kristin! We luvluvluv turns and following where they lead us.:) Only Jasper Kitten knows. Thank you so much for being here with us and for sharing your impressions of the unfolding mystery, my friend.

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